Silk Sunflowers

by A Christoffer   Jan 31, 2007


Just because she hides her eyes
doesn't mean she's crying.
Just as sure as winter comes
shouldn't mean her love is dying.
You can feel the sun shining down
even in december.

I see your candle flickering
it lights the room inside me
and i've watched you while you sleep
like heaven was beside me
now that we both sleep alone
I hope you still remember

The best part of all
the reason i called
I found you're silk sunflowers
It's been a while since i've seen you smile
I gave you silk sunflowers

you search for something beautiful
in you i find my shelter
a memory that's torn and dry
can still hold us together
and if you say you'll stay with me
my love i will surrender

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Oh my god, Your poem is beautifull!
    The flow was great throughout the whole thing which was good, The wording that was used was perfect for the poem. Loved the whole thing! 5/5 brillent job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem used such descriptive language and the words were amazing. The central message you were portraying was great and the poem was one of the best that I have read on this site.

    keep writing wonderful poetry, you could be famous for it one day.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethany

    I really enjoyed reading this poem.
    it accually made me smile and it has a good rythm.

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    Exelent poem, it was very well written and it made me miss my grilfriend alot. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Silk sunflowers...thats absolutely gorgeous, your writing is truly unique. great poem! 5/5

    ~jas~

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