That Place

by andrea   Jan 31, 2007


There's a place i want to be
This place is called alone
Im the only person with a key
Inside the room there is a stone

On this stone in the middle of the room
It says here is his soul
He gave it to me and zoom
He was gone with something he stole

The thing he stole was special to me
I needed it to live
It was mt heart you see
And thats something im not willing to give

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  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    This was deep...Wow..5.5 from me Oh yeah..I likeded it lots your a good writer

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Its alvaro hey ima go to that chat tab

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Hahah i never really thought comments on poems can be messages.. but w/e well thats cool i dont really pay attention 2 my teacher as well, haha matter of fact i wrote that poem during the class and posted it up here

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Yeh... um im in 10th..

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Cool i write poems everyday also i wrote not an innoncent child no more today haha i write poems about everything

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