Comments : Hear my cries,

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great poem i loved it i can really relate to what you are saying. keep it up shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Sad but beautiful poem, btw thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I loved this poem it's really good, and i know what it's like to have to cry yourself to sleep. anyways keep up the great work and thank you for the comment. shanik

  • 16 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    In this one the repetition of "Please come save me from this hell ride," was good because it was quite a meaningful line.
    I wasn't keen on the rhyme, to be honest it was ordinary and somewhat forced.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anne Garcia

    Hey Anonymous Angel! Great poem! I liked this one cause it rhymed and it had a flow and rhythm.... it was pretty sad though.

    * Thank you for checking out my poems. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Hey I like the rhyme in this poem :) it flowed well. I really felt the emotion in this poem keep it up! 5/5! and thanks by the way for your comment :) tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Great Job, I saw your post after I closed it, I would never turn my back on someone who was doing me a favor..:) Great poem...especially liked the way it was not necessarily organized every 4-6 or 8 lines in a stanza...the most amazing poems are scattered across the page...why use only 4"x3" of the page when there are 8x11" to utilize...great job, 5/5 -Unattractive1

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nicelyy written, I like the repetition of certain phrases. The flow was good, keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem thanks for your comment on "Kinky"

  • 16 years ago

    by IMMORTAL PAIN

    Oh man this poem got me all teary lol.. very good.. i can relate to most of your poems.. im going to add u to my favorates. keep writing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Cool poem. I really liked it. The flow was once again wonderful. I really enjoyed the word choice and the rhyming was great. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Hey,
    you did a really great job on this poem. The flow was excellent and you put meaning behind it 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The repitition was nice, not too overbearing. The rhymes were rather simple, but the flow was flawless. You should capitilize your I's as well. 5/5

    marcella

  • Aww, thid made me a bit sad =[[ but it's really good. Great job 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful, with excellently expressed emotions. I can deeply relate to this piece, you filled it with a lot of feelings.
    I like your choice of words here, and the flow that you created.
    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poseur

    This is beautifully written; you did a great job. i really like your technique, your style. keep it up.

    thanks for your comment ;)