Wow.. spectacular poem.. amazing imagery and great flow .. i really enjoyed reading this poem.. great worK!! and theres no other poems you need to comment.. but thanks ! :)

Wow this was very very very sad... It just amazes me how people can treat other people like dirt and not care about it really.. I liked how you put this poem through the victim's POV it made it very heartbreaking to read, just knowing that by the time the cops got there there would be nothing left for them to do. The beginngin of the poem was kind of weak but the rest was very powerful so it made up for it. Nice write and thanx for sharing it with us all.

Amazing poem...so good and you are really talented.

That poem was brilliant!!!
And to say you had no idea where it was going too.
1/5
No i'm kidding 5/5 =D

I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

Dude this is a sad yet very interesting poem. It really keeps you wanting to read more =) Keep on writing!!!

Wow!! this poem is really deep. I got chills when I read it. Good work!

Well written poem, loved the way it flowed... KEEP IT UP, U WRITE BEAUTIFULLY!

Well deep man i really liked that

Well deep man i really liked that

Very interesting read. :)

Pretty deep. I'm sorry if this is true. Great, great poem. Relates so much to what I read in my suspense novels. Awesome job. 5/5

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I like it
deep
great flow
yeppers

much emo over

I enjoyed this. thanks for the comments on my stuff xD
this was intensely descriptive I almost felt as if I was dying!

great
5/5

I really like this poem.... your really talented!!! i like all of your stuf... i am definatly adding you to my favourites =D

WOW, that was amazing. It really makes you think about life. It made me think about the things i can loose. I like the beginning most.

That was really good

Wow! dat waz...touchin! i luved it! :)

Nice write.

Sad yet interesting i loved it you are such a talented writer i really liked the imagery