Tempest Past (Cinquain)

by Avrii Monrielle   Feb 3, 2007


Tempest Past (Cinquain)

Darkest tempest of fatal desire,
Ariseth from thou peaks
Light the temptation of wants own fire
Awaken all the meek
Giving power to the weak

The planets align in chastity
Universal perforation
Pulsating through innocent childrens' dreams
Pumping blood in circulation
Awakening the entire nation

A culture lost within misery
Nightmares do take flight
Storm brewing, awakening within tragedy
Light lingering within thy eyes
Stopping for yonder passerby

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Cinquain: ababb

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  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Whooooaaa, omgosh rainy your beginning to go way over my head! your way better than me now, i can see that. this was amazing work. love love love it! i haven't gotten time to read your "i've never"s yet, but i will try to sometime soon!

    loooveee you lil sis, n deffinitly love you work! great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow! great work! 1st off i'd like to say thanks for the comment:) anyway, i loved this. omg u have a huge vocabulary..it takes some skills to be able to rhyme w/ such large words, and i'm very very impressed! lol. anyway, loved the detailing in this as well. keep up the amazing work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Very nice man, 100% my style of poem that I like, very well writen and smart choice of words,

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