"I have people who say they're my "friend",
But they don't always act like they are.
When times get hard,
I need them to be here for me,
To help me get through the pain,
But they just wanna play games"

Wow...So true!! I think thats the part I liked the most. I can relate to this poem a lot. I use to feel like no one was there for me all the time. 5/5
~Shae

Well hey, at least your still alive to let others read your poem. That's a plus, good work too. 5/5

This was good, but your other ones were better. this poem is just so negative. you must have been having a horrible day when you wrote this! well, to answer your question: you improved.

It is an old poem,
but it is definately not a bad one!
great job, the flow was perfect & your choice of words was as well
5/5

"No one will ever understand the way I feel,
And people act like they do,
But they don't,
They never will."
i think so many people can relate to this, i know i do, that is how i am feeling right now, and i think you got the idea out,
luv gabriella