Good Job!! I really like this one. i know exactly what you mean yet your words can explain it ALOT better than mine! 5/5

Love this poem. its awesome.

This was a really great poem....I went through this one n I know how u feel.....keep writin!!!

WOW!!!! i could really feel your anger in this poem.... man you kinda scared me lol.... but i liked it and keep up the good wrok 5/5

xoxoxo
Jess

WOW this voice;your voice; is very powerful and amazing in this poem! I loved it, weird to say but i can connect--that is how i feel about my ex! Great Poem!

Wow.. this poem is full of stong emotions.. i loved it..
all u need tro do is some capitalization work and this one stanza needs to b a lil different,,

As i said before i can't wait
Cannot wait for you anymore
I can't help but to feel
that you never gave a shit at all

it kinda threw off the flow a bit.

overall nice poem

I love this poem. deep, powerful and emotional. the last two paragraphs are beautiful, well done!!:)

This is an awsome poem, its so deep and meaningful
keep up the great work
5/5

I like it! I can sorta relate to this

I never comment on a poem in this section but
wow, this poem is so awesome, very clean subject and direct feelings...i understand how you feel bro

The Title is definitely fit for this poem; Yu used "waiting" 3 times in the first stanza Haha =P

Nah but it's a good poem;
Seems like yuu been hurt pretty bad...

This is wonderful;
like if the person it was for, knew it.
& in the end you want things to work out,
but you still get hurt.
& that's what kills.
<3

I know I already commented this but it's uper good ha ha.
: )

-hugs you-

your heart is not dead. :)