I thought that this poem was amazing, the flow and the word choice were wonderful in this piece. I sometimes find myself caught in the middle of reality and fantasy. Excellent poem 5/5 GG23

This is very strong poem with lexical quality and poetic quality in it. Very well written with nice vocabulary and meanings. Keep up the good work.

This was a well written acrostic! It's always hard to rhyme them, but you did a great job with the rhyme scheme. =] Keep it up!

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An impressive piece you have written here to tell you the truth I was quite stunned while reading this. The word choice was perfect written with such depth and the meaning portrayed behind this poem was outstanding. Amazing vocab. Well done on this I truely have enjoyed reading your poetry.~mel

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This was amazing m'dear, I find it hard to write acrostic poems and I have to admit this was one of the most beautiful acrostic poems I have ever read. good job.

5/5

Antoher beautifully written piece. I like the style you used, I will need to try it in my next poem.

Another good poem from you..and you really have a way with words...

but if you didnt say what reverie meant i wouldnt have known it.lol...

nicely done...again no need for improving this one either.5/5 keep it up.

Absolutely beautiful. Your vocab usage and flow were wonderful.

"Reality has become undone
Entwined with hope and wishes
Vendetta between right and wrong
Ends with hugs and kisses"

^ Those were my favourite lines. Well done.

5/5 and its for sure going to my favourite poems.short poem,but the emotions lies deeply,words are not common