Special Memories

5/5 i really liked this one. it had a nice flow and was easy to read and to understand.

i was nice if it was a little longer though.

That is definitely what it is all about.. i couldnt have said it any better myself.. you've taken the greatest parts of life and put them all together.. a beautiful poem.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

I couldn't agree more those memories do grow more precious.well done with this one.

ItS fascinatinG..... mE luV yR writingS....

luzaN

Was this poem supposed to rhyme? I couldn't tell because you used 'days' and 'day', which dont rhyme because they are essentially the same word and 'around' and 'about' don't rhyme, either, unless you say it in a funny way.

You should've gone on with the poem. It seems uncomplete, as if you took a saw and cut out middle part. Feels like something is missing from it.

I did enjoy the poem, although, at the end, you could've been more clear on what you meant by 'that's what it's all about'. What's 'it'? Life? Memories? Childhood? I couldn't tell.

Good poem.