Wow...just another gr888 poem of urs. i love it. keep it up.
peace!

That was awesome! Very creative, I like the opening and closing stanzas alot.

You're VERY talented. As I've already told you, it's one of the best poems I EVER read, especially lately. I love it! :)
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5/5

WOW! great job :)

Wow!!! WOW! great job keep it up! 5/5

Wow.. beautiful poem.. very well written.. every line expresses so much pain.. just beautifully expressed..u even express in a beautifull way.. keep it up..

Holy... wow. This might be my favorite so far on this site, no joke. You're freakin' skilled. I absolutely love this poem. Sooo powerful. Awesome job.

Woooowww...... As soon as I read the first two stanzas, I decided that after I finish the whole poem it's going straight to my favorites! It's beautiful, great job...

...wow, that gave me cold chills, dam that was good ^.^

:WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GO YOU:

xd

keep up the great work 5/5

"Love," i erased
Though once i beleived

love this part and i totally get it....really good

Everyone has murder in there heart whether it be by someone they had a relationship with or a loss I no i have.