Comments : Murder, I Wrote

  • 13 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Wow...just another gr888 poem of urs. i love it. keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by Alicia

    That was awesome! Very creative, I like the opening and closing stanzas alot.

  • 13 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    You're VERY talented. As I've already told you, it's one of the best poems I EVER read, especially lately. I love it! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by brit

    WOW! great job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

    Wow!!! WOW! great job keep it up! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaz

    Wow.. beautiful poem.. very well written.. every line expresses so much pain.. just beautifully expressed..u even express in a beautifull way.. keep it up..

  • 12 years ago

    by Katie

    Holy... wow. This might be my favorite so far on this site, no joke. You're freakin' skilled. I absolutely love this poem. Sooo powerful. Awesome job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Woooowww...... As soon as I read the first two stanzas, I decided that after I finish the whole poem it's going straight to my favorites! It's beautiful, great job...

  • 12 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden, that gave me cold chills, dam that was good ^.^



    keep up the great work 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by jane

    "Love," i erased
    Though once i beleived

    love this part and i totally get it....really good

  • 11 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Everyone has murder in there heart whether it be by someone they had a relationship with or a loss I no i have.