This is a promising poem. I liked your metaphor, it was well portrayed. It's nice to see some good vocabulary usage on here too; it's a rare but wonderous thing.
With all poems there are some areas that could still use some thought.
On the second line of the second stanza "dragged" disrupted the flow appearing after "clothing" maybe you could reword that?
Also, the last line of the third stanza didn't make sense to me and appeared as a forced rhyme.
Did you not mean "inpolite" rather than "not very polite."
In the fouth stanza, I cannot understand why "twas" is capitalised half way though a line.
It was a good write though. thanks for sharing.

Great job. i really LOVE this title. but the poem needs some work for example you changed the way you rhymed a lot. like you went from 1,3,2,4 to 2,4 if that makes sence. and it seemed at times the rhyms were forced.. such as.. strong and song. but on the other hand you had some really good lines. the flow was good but the last stanza even though it was sooooooooo good didnt fit with the rest in terms of flowing.
great job though!! :D

-liz

Woah. This was...beautiful. I love the way you wrote this...and the whole story behind it. I dunno what to say. I'm glad to have read this. Amazing write! I loved the last stanza. Grr. I'm so jealous of you. =/ Lol. Love ya.

-` Liz

Ohhh. This poem deserves to be longer. I read it..it just ended. It was really good though. 5/5!!!!

Amazed... I loved this poem so much. Written so well and had a really good flow. Great write! 5/5

marcella

Wow. i loved this. it was so wonderful & the flow was great the rhyming scheme was great the word choice was great oh i could go on.

this is one of the best poems i have read on this website. 5/5

Wow this poem is awsome.. I loved it and ur found the perfect category to place it under. The last two lines sumed up the entire thing just magically. It reminds me of the old saying "one mans junk is another mans treasure" and its true whats wonderful and pure to one person can become horrific and appaling to another person. Very nicely written. thanx for the comment

Wow. So beautiful *wipes tears*