Like all the other girls- A poem about anorexia

by AnorexicDream   Feb 4, 2007


Lyla can't finish her food.
Tells her parents she isn't in the mood.
And her sisters says she's lying
And her brother says she's dying.
Lyla starts crying
She is just trying

To be like all the other girls
In the thin world
She wants to be thinner
So her diet gets slimmer
To be like all the other girls
In the thin world.

Lyla is getting thinner.
From the lack of dinner.
Her mother doesn't understand
Her father wants to lend a hand
But she won't let him
Because she wants to be slim

To be like all the other girls
In the thin world
She wants to get thinner
So her diet gets slimmer
To be like all the other girls
In the thin world

It is taking over her
Of that they are sure
Her brother says she needs help
Her sister can do nothing but yelp
Lyla is loosing weight faster and faster
But somehow the thin girls pass her

To be like all the other girls
In the thin world
She wants to get thinner
So her diet gets slimmer
To be like all the other girls
In the thin world

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  • Good work

  • 16 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    Omg omg really good. it reminds me of that song Sophie by Eleanor Mcevoy.

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, really great poem... reminds me of a song called Sophie... i think you may have based this poem on those lyrics?
    well its really well written and structured anyways... so well done 5/5

    steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Dacey Flame

    I like this poem a lot. The flow isn't quite perfect, and the rhymes are simple, but it's a good message and I think you got it across pretty greatly =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Beatriz Zamora

    Its an amzingly good poem.
    and when i read it.
    lets just it reminded me of a lot.