Comments : Morning sunshine (a false title)

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I like the line "blanket of deceit"

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    A wondrefully written poem!!!
    a poem that sums up every sad and lonely person in the world.
    well done!!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    I love this poem! You're a great writer! Can you please comment on mine? :)

  • 17 years ago

    by halfwaytoinvisible

    I liked it. lots to think about. well done!