Powerful

Wow kim very poerfull and emotional peom. your very talented at writing keep it goin
take care
xx bri xx

Wow! really good poem!
anna soffe

That was good but you i didnt feel like you put your heart and soul into it i really didnt feel the conection but i was good

This poem was awsome keep up the good work

Damn awesome poem :)

Loved it KIM very good =) keep up

Its real good i like it actually i love it

Wow, you can feel the pain in this write as you read through it. May your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday.

sadaddy

Great emotion, and feeling

That was deep and heartfelt i like it keep writing

I think this poem illustrates your emotional strength as well as your poetic ability. you writing is really good and this poem has a depth to it well done.

Awww it really well written 5/5 keep up the awesome work

Gr8 poem baby n ill b here if u need me xxxx

Kim your poem did I do it was awesome, let me tell you it's always great to have someone that is always there for you especially when you feel low to the ground depressed believe I know! please check out my new poems and tell me what you think

Much love,
Verdada