Wow nice poem i really like it...very well written,....the feeling of the poem is very good...nice...Mandz

Very poetic!! great piece of work!!! 5/5!!!

It was good

Very dark and powerful! 5/5

Wow, very very awsome. i luved it and ill recomend u for the p&q contest...good job! 5/5

This poem flowed very nicely, and it paints the picture well...
PV

WOW! Excellent poem!
I really loved it!
Great job!
The flow was very nice
The imagery was very very good!
Very powerful! [5/5]

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`*-Tormented

Bloody amazing! A very powerful dark poem.

I really liked this poem, and I think the first stanza was my favorite. It was jagged and piecey, which I think added to the characters charm. This poem had a great flow, and the character seemed lost but not lost...if you know what I meant. Anyway, I loved it. Great work.

Brad

I love it, I think it was awesome. You're a great poet.