Very very nice, Very sab poem, Speaks with alot of emotion, Nice work =)

Very good.

Brilliant and unique 5/5

Hm.
Darn war.

Well done.

"Or milked of blood until their dry"
*they're

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They watch others around them die
Or milked of blood until they're dry

my favourite lines.. touched me in a weird way.. you really do have a way with words.

your poem made me think about putting things in perspective a little bit. awesome work.
5/5