Today

by kalelrobin   Feb 5, 2007


Today I wake up, its a whole new day,
Today, I wake up, making my new way,
Today, I wake up, holding my head high,
Today, I wake up setting my eyes upon the sky,
Today,I wake up, soring my wings wide,
Today I wake up , riding upon the biggest tide,
Today I wake up, determined to climb up the mountain ,
Today I wake up, releasing all I have like a fountain,
Today I wake up , feeling the taste of the track,
Today I wake up ,climbing up the stack,
Today I wake up, stairing myself straight in the mirror,
Today I wake up, building up my armour,
Today I wake up , ready to win,
Today I wake up ,making my dream,
Today I wake up, cause its a whole new day,
Today I wake up, having woken up!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Im not sure I like the repetitive style of this poem. But if you split it in half and forget the today I wake up part I believe you have great potential.Not only do you increase the tempo of the poem but you concentrate on your strengths, (its a whole new day - making my new way) / (holding my head high - setting my eyes upon the sky) logical and the imagary works well.
    I think your poems will be enjoyed by many here, Elise

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