Dear God

by BeautifullyBroken   Feb 5, 2007


You punish me with death
taking away someone i love
with a click of your fingers
3..2..1...they're gone
their life slips away like that

i prayed last night
i asked for them to stay alive
but within a few hours
you do something like this

Is it punishment for something?
did i do something wrong?
or are you preparing me
to handle bad times in the future?

or are you just trying to tell me
things only get worse?
people die, people are born
people hurt, and cry

Why should i try and get over this?
why should i get on with things
give me a reason why i should!
i only ever end up back here...

back at another funeral

whats the point in trying anymore...

(in memory of my Nan who died 5th Fed, 2007, 12:40pm)

I'll never forget you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    THIS POEM WAS REALLY GOOD

  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi

    This piece was beautiful. it sounds so hard for you right now, but remember not to give UP! the worst things in life, come before all the better things. keep your head held high and remember there's something BETTER coming for you, someday. remember that when you're down. remember that there are people out there, rooting for you to become something amazing.

    don't blame it on god. he's only trying to do the best for the world,, even though the death of loved ones aren't something great..

    keep your head high. write more! and smile too much.

    heidi b

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