Do You Care!?

by Jussika   Feb 5, 2007


Do you care if I'm Sad!?
Do you care if I'm Mad!?
Do you think I'll Miss?
Do you think I'll be Kissed!?

Do you care if I'm Wrong!?
Do you care if I'm Strong!?
Do you wish if I was there!?
Do u wish if I really Care!?

Do you care if I Die!?
Do you care if I Cry!?
Do you die if I Cry!?
Do you cry if I Die!?

Do you think I'll Miss you
if I let you Go!?
Do you think I'll be hurt
when you Go!?

Well I do...I care!

Written By:Jussika
Dedicated To:Micho

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  • 18 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    "Do you care if I'm Sad!?
    Do you care if I'm Mad!?
    Do you think I'll Miss?
    Do you think I'll be Kissed!?"
    ~you should change miss to Missed
    and
    "Do you care if I Die!?
    Do you care if I Cry!?
    Do you die if I Cry!?
    Do you cry if I Die!?"
    ~Will you die if i cry
    ~Will you cry if i die.

    its a really good poem. just little things like that bug me.
    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by azii

    Hey thanks for the comment! :) I added u to my favs so i could comment u back when u submit some poems.. :)

    This one was a good poem. I rly liked it! Keep up the good work! :)

    Can't wait to read ur new ones !! :) <3

  • 18 years ago

    by iTSZ ASHLEY- M0CKABEE, H0ESZ!

    I THiNK THiS iS REALLY CUTE..

    :]

    i LiKE iT.. AL0T

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