Just love me! and life will be easier

by Melissa   Feb 6, 2007


Hey i wrote this poem, its about a guy that i love hes 4 yrs older then me.. im onli 13 lols and ive liked him for months and of course we cant go out..
anyways i wrote thiss about him..

No words ever spoken

Could explain what u mean to me

Everything just seems so right

So y cant it be?

Ur the only one I want

Youâ??re all I could ever ask for

No sweeter, no nicer, nothing at all

I look at you and for as far as I can see its just light

And I no your the one, because love has never, ever, felt so right

So y is it only me that can see this

This feeling or love, this sudden bliss

Can you tell me what this means?

And if nothing was ever to happen

Would u think about what couldâ??ve been??

As this feeling of heartache and love continues

Ill just wait thinking..

Maybe u r right, maybe this love isnâ??t worth the fight

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  • 18 years ago

    by homebound

    Great job...i like a guy who is in my sisters grade, i am in 7th and she is a sophmore...and of course he doesnt know and it can never happen! Great job with making it flow!
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    ~Peanutt

  • 18 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Very conflicting poem. a love so great should be fought for cause it'l make it so much better. i liked the rhythm of it. u should spell check it and make it a lil better in that sense. it'll make it a better read.

  • 18 years ago

    by *far away lover*333

    I know that it's none of my business, but I know how you feel... if it's meant to be, he'll realize what he's missing= you. I know I'm just some random stranger, but trust me when I say that it's always worth a try...because if you don't try, you'll NEVER know what could have been.

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