Parents fighting i know the bitter end of it, i feel your pain, but ull just have to bear with it, nice poem though!

Gosh this poem makes me so sad..cuz i know the story behind it=[...but its really good writing!

I hope this hasn't been happening in your life :( it's short but it has the perfect amount of description and emotion in it 5/5

Wow this was very beautifully written i know what its like to be abused so yea but anyway i loved it 5/5

Wow abuse is bad its a terrible thought and u expressed this very well 5/5
*kaila*

Amazing flow in this one. It's a really sad topic, but again you wrote it well. 5/5

marcella

This was so sad yet such a great read.

''I hate when they fight,
I hate when they yell.
Im dying inside cant anyone tell.''

I really liked that part, I thought it had great impact.
Wonderful work.

Finally its over,he finally wins,
I just hope I dont have to hear it again.

i understand the feelings behind this poem.. how sad to who we love they dnt give it to in return.. but we still love the.. may things will be good gor you.. this poem is full of pains. i liked your talent take care

Wow very sad and deep.short but all the emotion was there.very good xx

Short, Strong, Full of Emotion, I just love it. If this is what you're going through, I'm really sorry for you. Keep strong! 5/5

So much pain is depcted in this poem,
it's sad and touching to the heart. I give
it a 5/5!! :)

Short but sad. How anyone can be so violent towards someone they supposadely love really confuses me.
A good poem
love Tara-Kay
x

Sad and full of emotions but its really good
good work <3