The Silent Night

by Ray the emo i am   Feb 8, 2007


The stars shine bright
The sky is clear
The screams I hear
Then suddenly It goes quiet
Only to awake with blood on me
Laying on the ground
My love smashed against a tree
As I crawl to her
I hold her tight
I lost my love that night
I cry and fight not to die
As the moon shines its light on us
Oh so bright
It was a silent night.

Happy Birthday Amy, I know your in a better place.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachael

    I love it and are so glad you gave it to me to keep, your such a great writer Ray, way better than me any day lol
    -rach

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Aww it made me cry!!!!
    this poem was short yet it was amazing and filled with emotion!!!
    great write
    5/5
    --Jess

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    This is great too.You are a great writer.I really enjoy reading your work.

    Kelsie

  • 17 years ago

    by Renee

    That is mucho good
    i got that feeling you had
    right before you cry

    amber

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