Very good! I loved it! Love your rhyming, and word choice. Great imagination. The only part I went 'duh' on is 'Whilst' .. lol .. Some of the flow didn't go so smooth, but over all you had a great poem, i loved your last stanza :) Amazing!

Great Job babe

5/5

That was a great poem. The word choice was unique and creatively thought out. keep up the nice work. it's a very deep and strong poem.

This was great. I love the final stanza. But iunno. It seems like there's something missing. or maybe it's just me. Lol. Anywho, this was an excellent write. I loved it! 5/5

-` Liz

Sad, sweet AND good. a simpley comlicated way to describe love...lol >.<

5/5

I LOVED THE LAST STANZA and i love your vocabulary u put such complicated things to describe into such easy to understand ways haha i loved it... 5/5 from me!!! great write!

Interesting questions provoked in this one Sarah. I liked how you ended it with a question, seems rhetorical. I guess the only person who knows the answers to this one, is you. But it was interesting to read nonetheless.

That poem right there, proves just how amazing you are, and explains why your on my favorties. It's just unbelieveably good, haha.
i loved it XD