This was really sad and very well written. I loved it.

If it makes you feel any better, I know the feeling oh too well. You're not alone if this is true.

Nice write, though.

Aaah this is so heartbreaking. You really know how to make us feel your pain. Such a powerful, sad, and soulful piece. Very beautifully written, great choice of words and nice flow...

Awww yes yet again, a wonderful poem by Darien! It's so sad, so gloomy, you feel like you're living your pain. i'm sry, it seems like it really came from the heart, beautiful job 5/5

Awwww im touch by this poem and also was about to cry because i understand where you're coming from.I really really like this poem.Good Job

I deeply feel your pain :|(Nice poem btw)

In the corner I feel comforted by the walls
Hugging my knees like I was hugging a friend

^Love those lines.

I really enjoyed reading this poem! It had emotion inside. A very well written poem Darien.

I like it seems as if she is the only thing he have. the ending is very catchy. gr8 job:)

She gave up on me, she fell out of love
I lost everything I ever had and wanted

I loved those two lines, honestly! Wow, It's like me, although with a guy. I lost everything I once had..good write, I'm gonna keep checking out your work.

Remarkable.
I love this poem too.
You're an excellent writer. I'm going to add you to my favorites. Keep up the amazing poetry.
-Heather

Awe. Darien!! This is so sad ;[ It brought tears to my eyes.. Such a horrible story, Hun. I hope this isn't true. If it is; I'm always here. This flowed really well. I loved the similes in this. Wonderful job, hun.

Bri [x]

This poem is sooo sad. it is very touching, but makes me want to cry

It hurts so much when I think of her
She quickly moved on and she is happy
It hurts more because I still love her
We were once so perfect, now all is lost

yet if you love her you will be happy that she is happy now. even if that is not with you. i dont knwo if this is a true story but it seemed real. was so vivid, the descriptition the most!

5/5 always, david

This poem speaks to me, probably cause I have experienced this before. 5/5