Perfect suicide

by XxPoeticEmoxX   Feb 11, 2007


We shall commit perfect suicide tonight at the stroke at midnight underneath the dead tree of lost hopes we can swing from the one of the branches of the tree with ropes around our necks or slit our wrists and bleed as water.

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  • 17 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    HELLO JACK! this is very good....depressing but i like it!

    sweet*electric =)

  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    I would work on your sentence structure with this piece, so it flows more like music. I think you have a good start here, but I believe you can do better,

  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    That...Was scary....I liked it.
    (^v^) Evil Penguin

  • 17 years ago

    by courtz; youliedyoubrokemyheart

    I will commit this with you xo

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