Comments : Looking Out The Window

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I was like 'Ehh, the rhyming is kind of cliche..' But, that ending. BAM. I love it. It was so sweet and touching.. Very nicely done. I also loved the repition of the title. A wonderful write, my dear.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh wow. this was wonderful. there is absolutely nothing about this poem that I would and could even try to change. The word choice was superb and the content was better.

    Great job, your writing is truly some of the best on this website.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by vanessa

    That is a very nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by lost soul

    Woah.. amazing.. i love poetry too bad i cant rlly write it.. lol omg so good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    I feel like you just described my day today,snow and all,great rhymes nice flow ,good content. great job all round.

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Rae

    Wow....you write really good stuff....you have TALENT..

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is a a very good poem..sad but very good

  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    I enjoyed reading this poem, and I say this with much truth. It reminded me of what winter is sometimes symbolized as. Sadness and memories when one think sit too cold to step outside.Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was a deep and beautiful poem it shows a lot of emotion and i really enjoyed reading it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherish

    Another great amazing fabulous poem xxx