Comments : The Truth

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww your words are true! Well done. I find this poem sweet.. And I like the opening stanza! good job! 5/5! as always keep writing my friend.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rocky

    I feel this is one of your weaker poems. it doesnt have your usual style. and instead follows the 4 lines per stanza and simple rhyme scheme of nearly every poem on this site.
    Love is the law
    Love under will
    Rocky