Ok. I'm not sure why I'm having so much trouble with this, but I've edited the word "I've" into "I'd" about three hundred times and a half, and it doesn't seem to be fixing itself... So I ask you to ignore that silly little thing there, and simply comment on whatever else you feel you can comment on. Sorry 'bout that...Thanks in advance. Best wishes.-Stefhy

Wow, Hun. This was so amazing. It flowed really well. The ending was a bit rocky, I think. But this was just so heartfelt. I really loved this. It said so much about you. And, in a way, I can totally relate to it.

I loved the very last two lines :] So beautiful.

My secrets can't be revealed,
By simply speaking them outloud
My photographic memory
Developes pictures underground.

^ My favorite stanza. This was just, wow. PERFECTLY PERFECT.

Beautifully penned, m'dear.

Bri [x]

This describes exactly where I am in life right now, I could not believe I found a poem with this exact meaning in it,

Your poetry is awesome and rhymes great,

I was just randomly browseing poems and I found this one, so glad I did too!

keep up the good work =)

This is a real keeper.....What you have touched here will multiply in depth...will be even more Precious and Priceless to you years from now..

"My photographic memory
Develops pictures underground."

mine, too...'-)

That was greatly done, thanks for the comments on mine also...i look forward to reading more of yours and making more detailed comments, i just have to go to work and only had a second to comment. btw you might want to add a "d" to love in the last stanza. thanks again and ill be back online soon.

I've felt exactly like that before. And I did everything but the right thing, to tell him what was bugging me. I hurt him that way. This was a wonderful poem, Sometimes i get bored with poems and stop halfway, but that one trapped me, it was really nice. I totally connect to what you wrote.