Shining star

by Hes the one who holds me tight   Feb 13, 2007


Looking at the hole.
She sees a shining star.
Inside the bloody wound.
It doesn't seem as far.

Shes now cold and wet.
Sore and alone.
She doesn't need your help.
Because her heart is blackened stone.

Inside the shining star.
Lives someone out of site.
Love burning with a passion.
Her mind begins to fight.

Leaving her body sedated.
They never see her fall.
Loving to watch her lonely face.
Never missing her love at all.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sabree

    Wonderful 5/5 for you! Keep writing you have serious talent.

  • 17 years ago

    by kelsey

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    KELSEY

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Deep and great. i liked this poem alot.

    your servant:
    david

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