Sober Notions

"Her poison, "

OMFG i love that line. It can be used in so many ways.
Your poems are so short, but they are so meaningful. Very incredible. You have an incredible talent. Sooo much great and useful potential. You won't have any trouble finding a publisher.
5/5
~yellowfeverlime

This is simple, and yet you still don't openly say what you are talking about, until the more obvious last two lines. You leave your poetry open for interpretation, that isn't always easy to do without completely confusing the reader. I like this poem, you use great words to describe everything and it really gets the reader feeling what you are talking about. Great write. 5/5

Tammie

I clicked on 1 of your poems and couldnt stop reading. i read and read all of them.there is something unique about your writing it might not be understood easily.Thats a great thing though cuz a good element is to make u think and your poems would make me wonder.Your poems opens a whole new world of poetry.

Well this one is a little more easy to comprehend, still has big words, i give this one a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Very good writing.