by Kirsty
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Perfect. Loved it!! 5/5 |
by Cyma Khan
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Too good!!! |
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I thought it was great, you have good writing skills! |
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It never fails, every poem ive read of your is truely good, and i love acrostic, this one is perfect, i ive it a 5/5!!! keep writing joe!!!! |
by donk2ymouth
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Pretty good description, I got a good picture in my head for an acrostic poem, since they are kind of limited. The "A" kind of threw me off, but other than that it was pretty good. It's kind of hard to critique this type of poem. Keep up the good work. |
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Wow that was rele good. rates high |
by Cattiebrie
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Acrostics are difficult, well done! not crazy about un-understood, but other than that, I really enjoyed it! nice read |
by debbylyn
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Nice job on the acrostic form Joe! |
by LadyWaszky
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Awesome Joe. as i nominated you for Poem of the week. =] |
by Liz
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Another good poem, Joe. Dunno what to say. this was kinda more different than your other acrostics. But a good write nonetheless. Keep writing!!! |
by Jenni
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I liked this! I always love reading Acrostic poems, they really show me which writers have the best talent, & i must say, you are one of them! |
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Aw. I loved the title, for one thing. 'Back Alley Beautiful.' It has a nice ring to it. I loved the last lines the best, the ones that spelt out beautiful. Nice work. Beautiful poem. 5/5 |