Now THAT was a GREAT POEM!!! Not to say the others rnt...more to say that this 1 really caught my interest...even more so than the others. Its really important to have some1 who loves you for you and wat you possess on the inside....and not wat you possess material wize. It would appear your man does..and thats GREAT!!! That's really AWESOME....and the poems is spectacular!!! And of course...i feel the same way...the more i read your poems...the less ideas i have to write my own cuz i feel as if tho you reach in2 my very heart and soul and take my exact thoughts...and put them to words. But i do not intend to quit writtin...i will endeavor. In ne case....AWESOME poem...im sure your very happy now...and will b even more so once your in each others arms loving each other forever...nice job!!!

-Seanny

That was a great poem Michelle. You sure have talent. Great job in writing this piece,and of course, all your other poems (they're all great). Keep them coming. All the best for the future.
Kristina

awww my dear sweet baby, do you really think these things in the first part of the poem? come over here and sit next to me, let me put my arm around yr waist and pull you in tight. rest your head on my shoulder while i stroke yr cheek. no honey i couldnt find anyone more beautiful than you, if i searched the whole wide world over no one would compare to the angel i have in my arms. no one even comes close to MY sweetheart. you have eclipsed every other girl in view and made me feel like the luckiest man to have ever lived. whenever i see you on the screen or view the pictures you have sent me i tremble with such painful longing and yearning ache i feel my flesh burn with lust and desire.
I`ll open that bottle then blow and whisper in your ear `i love you michelle smith, please be my wife`. As i run my fingers through your hair and kiss your smooth forehead notice the tears in my eyes, feel my arms holding tighter. i have never met anyone more perfect than my baby, never known anyone with a purer soul or a bigger heart. im experiencing emotions that i never knew i could possibly feel and swooning from your love that warms my every waking moment.
take my hand and step out of the cage of self doubt and insecurities. im never letting you go and will always be here for you, my fiancee of the heart. come rain or shine, hell or high water im going to be here right next to you, shoulder to shoulder weathering the storms that life will bring. i hereby promise to protect and provide for you for the rest of my exsistance. you and me forever my beloved. your my end of the line.
`you wont find anyone more devoted` im begining to believe that honey, with every early morning phone call you make i realise i have never know someone more dedicated, more determined than my special little you. never heard someone more headstrong or fueled with fortitude that this WILL work. thank you for erasing my doubts, shredding my hesitations and eliminating any apprehension.
as the song says your love `keeps me warm night and day` and everything in my life is geared and designed to be with you. any sacrafice i make that brings me a step closer to you will be taken with a happy smile on my face. `you wont find someone who cares more` i feel tears welling in my eyes as i read that line and recognize the truth in it. you keep me hanging on babe when everything around me errupts and blows up in my face. your my goal now and nothing or no one on God`s earth is going to stop me being with you. nothing in my life matters anymore other than finaly comming home to were you are so finaly my restless spirit can find solace and completion by your side.
`you wont find anyone that loves you more` oh angel i know. i can feel your love eminating from way across the atlantic and flying straight into my heart. your affection from over 4500miles away brightens and lifts my wretched being and your loving essence is everywhere i see and feel like the `air i breath`. if i were to say thankyou a thousand times an hour is would still be insufficient gratitude for the joy and ecstacy your love has blessed my life with.
to say i love you has become meaningless, to say i adore you sounds corney, to say i cant live without you is closer to the truth, but to say i NEED you now and would rather die than be without you perfectly somes up my feelings. dont say `thankyou for thinking im beautiful` because in my eyes that seems a ridiculious thing to say. THANK YOU michelle for being beautiful and for winning over my affections when i tried to back away. love you forever, YOUR craig [x=x=x]

once again i can relate, great job