Comments : Deep Within My Soul

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Wnderful to Love.........and Trust someone.....rising in Love.....so poetically.....

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Welcome back, am so sorry couldnt read it before, this site is totally messed up nowdays.

    You hvnt lost a inch of ur magic and its really nice to have u back, though i guess u hv lost ur regular readers...but u'll surely get them back.

    I hope this time u will stay for a longer time on this site.. :o))

    all the best and take care

  • 13 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very sweet romantic poem. Nice to see you back.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    I'd walk miles to be with you
    I'd live in a dream just to make it come true
    whatever pleases your heart, soul and mind that I will do
    I can't help it, even if I wanted to
    I'm falling more and more in love with you.

    Good job. I really liked this stanza the most.

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Love the write, nicely done!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I'd walk miles to be with you
    I'd live in a dream just to make it come true
    whatever pleases your heart, soul and mind that I will do
    I can't help it, even if I wanted to
    I'm falling more and more in love with you.

    Breathtaking. You have amazing talent. I look forward to more writings and I've added you to my fav.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cuddles

    If ever I could find the words to tell my fiance how I feel it would be these. Beautifully expressed emotion in this piece.

  • 13 years ago

    by David

    Oh the love in this poem was excellent. i lvoed it. my heart is beating really fast. trully awesome.

    5/5 David

  • 13 years ago

    by Nee

    The way I feel I just can't explain
    there's a music in my heart
    that beats with the melody of your name
    ===========================
    this was really grrrr88!!
    I loved those lines & the ending the most..
    I know this would be tooooooo late..but lately I hvn't been reading ANY poems or even writing..Idk if I quit..its hard to decide since I already miss writing =(

    anyway ur piece was v romantic..expressed ur true love..i hope its true :D :D
    wish u the best hun
    miss ya
    xxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Aure

    Like how you compare love with things like the ocean, music etc. it shows how deep your love is.

    Great writing and superbe flow