Damn dude the last two lines got to me man "My love I give to thee...
I am so in love with you, Mamie" it was great

Darn it, Bill, it's kinda hard to comment a poem when your eyes are watering and you can't see to type

^^ I concur with Di I am so teary eyed right now....I used to tell you all the time that I couldn't read your poetry without crying and here Bill you have proved, you are still a hell of a poet who can do that to any woman reading your pieces...what an excellent write for Mamie and I hope one day I can find a husband whose love for me is as strong and the love you have for your wife :-) How could you not vote this a 5? Excellent stuff!
Chels

Bill
This is truely a beautiful poem of your love. I rember feeling this way for so many years. Now only long for the return of these feelings. You are truely a very lucky man. Excellent job! Thinking of you. Your friend Cindy

I smile...
As I am loved by you
I grin...
Because of my desire for you
I no longer wander...
Lost among the empty souls and faces
I am at home...
^^^^

Beautiful, my friend ....
Brings tears to my eyes, it is just so beautifully penned from the heart.

My love I give to thee...
I am so in love with you, Mamie
^^^
Bringing tears once again. This ending just reaches out and touches my heart.

There are no games. There is no pretending. There is no deception. There is no fear of reprisal because unconditional love is the foundation upon which their relationship has been built.
^^^
I read this on a site a few days ago (thanks to you, my friend) ... it comes from a piece about "Twin Souls" .......
And I really thought it belonged right here.

A poem I hope to see bless the front pages of P&Q. You have my vote for sure.

Take care and have a wonderful weekend and say Hi to Mamie for me.
((big hugs to you both))

Another love poem that makes me go, "awww" haha. sorry.
I liked it, it's sweet and thoughtful, very giving as far as a poem goes. I like the description of "giving my all" to a person, expressing how much they really mean to you, and I think that's what the entire poem was about. Good read

Ah, a pure expression of love and devotion that truly touches the heart. The flow is great, the rhyme scheme unobtrusive, leaving the emotion to shine through in all it's glory.
Peace, Love, Poetry & Power,
Gary Jurechka

I usually don't read these mushy poems but this one caught my eye
good stuff man really i love it
cy

Wow! superb work dear!

so nicely witten. i loved it :0)

luv

Bill...what can I say....I'm speechless...such a beautiful write my friend and it leaps from your heart....
Ann

Very nice and beautiful