Comments : Be my valentine

  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Aww, got me right in the heart that did! Wonderfully written, and good rhyme with a good flow. Wow, you're pretty good. I'll have to read more.

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda

    Wow that was really good it made me miss my boyfriend. Its like you have been watching us and you put my feelings that i have for him in words. Beautifully written keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by taylor

    That is beautiful. reminds me of my loving boyfriend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful poem. Your love really shines in this. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by secretbella954

    This is an amazing poem!!!!
    Its great!!! Keep it up
    shannon<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    I'm sorry to say this......but V-day sucks old man balls....

  • 17 years ago

    by bobo2011

    Dam that is friggin good. and i mean that is a good way. dam i wish i could write like that.. love sam

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw that was so sweet.. I loved it.. I really like fresh little poems like this you did a really good job.. and its very lucky that you have somoeone who makes you feel that way, a lot of people go through life without ever findind that someone, the ones who do are extremely lucky and should hold on to that.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Omg another great poem of yours 5/5 keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Very sweet poem indeed. It's so genuinue and real. I particularly liked how your poem interwines

    "YOU HEAR WHAT I DON'T SAY..
    I SEE WHAT YOU DON'T SHOW.."

    That's what love is ... two hearts interwined together as one, complimenting each other. Great write. Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Awww... this is adorbale... im not sure why its all caps though..? :/

    anyways... the emotion in this poem AGAIN is wonderful.... you really let all your feelings known... wonderful choice of words.. definitly my favorite poem so far... beautiful job

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. the caps really stands out. this poem was incredibly sweet. the one inside this poem--i love them already!

    beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Hey guys, i know its annoying in capitals, but it wont edit!! so this will have to do :O)
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.