Comments : Played Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    "Your just using me,"
    [You're just using me]

    "To play your stupidity games."
    [It sounds better as 'stupid games']

    "As I enject so many thoughts in my head."
    ['inject']

    Very nice poem, except for the small mistakes in grammar and spelling. It had a lot of raw emotion and the readers could feel it easily. I can definitely relate to this poem. Well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awsome poem! There was so much emotione. I love poems with a lot of emotion and this is definetly one of them. I can relate as i'm sure a lot of people can. You did a great job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was great i know what a broken heart is like men can be so cruel i loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    So sad. and so good. i must say i have really enjoyed reading your poems. this one has so much sadness in it. it reminds me of so many times i experienced when i was younger. i'm looking forward to more of your poems!! 5 for you! -beav