Comments : Her

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Your stories seem that they won't have an end but it's really cool,keep them coming,and take care of yourself honey
    See ya

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This poem was dark in all its darkness but some things, when read, just got me out of the mood...for example "Or do you look past that and say her friends hot".&& "But all you could think to do was kick her head"...i dont know what about these two lines throws me off but its something about the randomness that has nothing to do with darkness..all else was vell written and had a good flow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So questionable thing,i really liked it,
    keep on writing honey you have skills
    Take care of yourself
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Very very very wel written!
    loved the flow of the poem...
    though u asked questions,,, u even answered them all... you really got the talent... keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, this is a really poerful piece. You write with great emotion, while keeping a nice flow. Dark, yet beautifully written piece. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Very different from the your new ones..
    it rhymes so well!

    keep it up!