Wow. I loved this poem. it flowed wonderfully. the only thing that i would change was this line.

She set up a trap and i like and idiot fell.

did you mean, she set up a trap and like an idiot i fell? if yes,then that's how I interpreted it.

my favorite part was this line

you were the reason of my life and existence
and i just created distance.

just amazing!

Beautiful flow and structure! 5/5

Man this is a good poem but that is messed up how you lost your friend. I'm sorry but great poem.

U write really well, i liked the flow of this poem and the way in which it was written, u told a sad story beautifully, my fav bit was:

you were the reason of my life and existence
and i just created distance

AMAZING!!