Comments : Can you see it in my eyes?

  • 17 years ago

    by girl

    AWSOME! i <33 this! 5//5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was just amazing, so very beautiful.
    I loved it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by shaun kelly

    Hmm if only my gf would write this to me :) WOW! its awsum

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this ppem is beautifully written love it

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I made a poem like this, but this is so much better with more of a story line. this is great! clap clap.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    AWWH!
    This was so cute and sweet.
    it flowed well and the imagery was wonderfully done.
    Beautiful work.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Cute that was the bestest :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Wow this poem is beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by BlEeDiNg FoR tHe OnE i LoVe

    I LOVE this poem its amazing!!!!! I love all ur work u r a fantastic poet.....