Very lyrical, loved the rhyme scheme, Good write, I love the last 2 lines ^_^

This is a very good poem the only thing i would change is this.
"The only thing that tied her to

To what she once believed"
I would take to word to out of the first line so it would be....

The only thing that tied her

To what she once believed

i hope that helped. 5/5

<UnToLd TrUtH>

You need to group some of the lines together to make paragraphs, makes it easier on the eyes. lol.

5/5 david

Aww.. i really really liked the last two lines..

Aww.. i really really liked the last two lines..

Omg.. the last two lines are perfect, they really made the poem. i love this one!!! it has to be my favourite of your pieces.

much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow this is really good. i think you did a great job writing it. i really like what it says in the poem. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Really good. great job! the flow is good & the wording is good!

The emotion in this poem was wat i call eletric! it was intence! i loved it. sad but very enjoyable to read.

5/5 David

I can relate a lot to this. The flow and the rhymes were both good. Overall this was a nice poem. You did a lovely job expressing the emotion in it. Well done!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Awesome poem, very deep, very good word usage, great emotional writeing, nice work, 5/5