Wow this is a good poem I enjoyed it. I really love the references to being under a spell. that is awesome.

Ah yeah, love is a right hard master indeed. Poem gets this point of view across well. Liking it.
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This was a beautiful poem and well written it really gets the point across i really liked it 5/5

"So hopeless cus it's impossible i get so confused"

the words in the poem were good, however could you maybe change that to full english, 'cause instead of cus. and I felt that the flow of the poem could do with some work, but overall very good

This was wonderful :) it has left me thinking about so much

The flow was off but another great great great poem by you. you have amazing talent keep at it

The flow was quite broken but i really felt the emotion. congrats

much love and many kisses,
bex