Very sad Cindy.....hope you feel better....

Very sad. I am alwaya with you in your heart. I miss you!! Nice job on the poem!

Trying to get through the night
Just knowing nobody is there
Waiting on the sun to rise
I hate feeling this despair

u make me speechless with such wordings....??

all the best and take care

Hi i loved that..
it blew me away...
this may make you a littel freaked out though i have a little how i can judge a person by there poems and the loss of your husband he would be greatfull to have a wife like u...

This poem is just amazing. I can relate to this in so many ways. With the darkness and the quietness and lonliness. This is just a great poem.
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"Trying to get through the night
Just knowing nobody is there
Waiting on the sun to rise
I hate feeling this despair"
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^ I love those stanzas, especially. I loved the whole poem! ;P Excellent write! 5/5 Never stop writing!

-` Liz

Your all poems are very good... and feel happy tht yourthis poem rleates to me take care.. its my pain.

Touching and heart wrenching. Beautifully written through the sadness.

This was a great poem, the nightz are alwayz th worst for lonliness. it seems like forever just waiting for the sun to rise. well done xoxo

Ive been there before and left, and it wont be the last time. nice work.

Excelent work, a really sad and very decriptive poem, you can feel the sadness, lovely words 5/5. xxtake carexx

if you have the time will u read one of my poems and comment i would really appreciate it. xx

keep writting, would love to read more, your a true poet hun. xx

Good write. i can relate to feeling alone so many a days. best wishes. 5/5

That was so sad Cindy. Just know you have tons of friends here. Nicely written.

BEUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

Such a sad and heartfelt poem with pure emotion.
Well done, my friend
love Tara-Kay
xxx

Wow. that was a really good poem.
actually, scratch that. it was a very very very very good poem.

keep it up.

Cindy this is very well written, you make your reader feel what you feel,thats not always easy, hope you find happiness.

Awh this is sad=[ but amazing writing! i love all your poems! good work!

Cindy, u did a great job!!! I'm sorry i haven't been keeping in touch with u. i have been moving. But great job!!! i felt you completely in this poem. 5/5!

I thought that It was a very good poem.I can relate to this poem because I have been through lots of drama in my life and I just want to tell you that even though you may feel alone ,there is always someone out there who feels the same as you.you are not alone......

That made me cry well done ill give it a 5 =)