Comments : Not so far away.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    I like this one, especially the last line. It was very heartfelt, and emotional, and I know you're really angry about this situation, but you can't let it bother you, and I know I'm being really hypocritical here, because I'm the worst person at letting things go, but you and wayne have something special, and you can't let the past bother you. Anyway I liked this, great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was very well written but i believe that everyone had a second chance and that if u had done what she done instead of her doing it and she got angry at u u would feel different about the situation, or you coulda did it back to her so she would feel the same hurt u do, but thats just my opinion, it was a great poem 5/5