Nice work. the start was very good it shows the talent whhc you have good work all poem nice. 7/7 take care your friend
forever in love

No Rhyme
No Pattern of writing

still it holds so much of depth that i just loved it...very nicely written indeed

all the best and take care

and hold on.. :o)

A pleasurable read no doubt. Strong sentiment and a lil on the sad side but very well written!

A little sentimental...a little sad. Very nicely done!!

Nice poem mind blowing...its got a deep meaning.. good work..
mohd 5/5

Dear you left me with an elusive question on this one... i wonder what is missing you. its a great piece and your words are really true. 5/5

So beatiful...5/5

Beautiful poem and tru to the word!5/5

Aisha
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Marhaba....

sooooo beautiful.....very true indeed.....

ma'assalama
salwa