Overall...pretty good. i like to keep my stanzas accurate and flow with the same count. but this says a lot. good job! =o]

Thanks for your comments =')

I like this poem it made me realaize that the guy i thought was perfect might not be at all!!!
thanx, well if u have a chance comment mine
laterz

I really loved this =) I totally relate to it from a couple of times in my life lols I loved the flow and words and the feelings behind it =) A great write but even better to read :) I'd love to see more like this from you =) A perfect 5 if you ask me lols =)
Rhea

=')
Thanks.

I hope you don't get into another situation like that ;)
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:).. girl i loved it:)..

this poem very very good:)
especially the last line :):):)

I loved it :):):)

keep up girl:):))

Amazing poem, beautiful and a sad love poem.....
**Every kiss that you don't give me,
Every time that you don't call,
Everytime I say forgive me
And you say nothing at all.**

-----i am in love with this stanza...its inspiring and beautiful-----

tara