Beav,

Awesome...self-recognition and self-actualization are signs of that becoming. Amazing usage of words. We want to be honest with ourselves, and who we are, and how we have grown, which includes our delusions about ourselves, and everything we have lost along the way. 5/5 my friend.

Good, i like it

Way out of my level of education
but i'll read anything you put out

Very unusual poem. Like the other poem, it also has this rush to it makes your heart pound. The ending was abrupt but powerful as well

Very nice poem...u put alot of emotion into it..great job!

Nice write i liked it alot!

Woah this is filled with emotion just waiting to burst i loved it

Wow nice work and effort. when i read this poem i was reminded of myself. i'm excited to read more of your work. great vocab and hidden depth. --jarrod.

Such a wonderful use of vocabulary! I absolutely loved this poem, you did a wonderful job at describing the entire poem, 5/5

Wow. that was really well writen. well done hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

Great poem... the flow was excellent as well as the word choice.. keep it up :D

Hey i got a couple new friends i think
you'll like this one poet from s africa
called crying angel he always puts hidden meanings in his poems its so cool check them out addiction is one of his poems and haily shes trying to quit drugs and having a tough time her latest is i want some i need some. i wiish i could be wherever she
is to help her and meat the same time we proably both wine high cause two dead batteries still won't start a car
cy

Another one too hurting inside
by octoberlifeguard

I GOT ONE UP

Thanks for your comment they always make my day. read haily latest poem
today i broke down and my comments on there. i really could use some feedback on how else i can make her see that shes wasting her
life. man i finally understand how everyone feels when i relaspe man
i hate it. i relly want to find the right
words to say that brings haily home
help me help her jen plesae it really hurts . cy

Another great poem very well worded 5/5 your very talented