Well done huni,yet another great poem.great use of words and flow 5/5

Heyy that was great very well written. great job keep em coming. xx

This was beautifully written.
So very sweet yet almost sad at times.
The imagery and flow were wonderful.
Excellent work.

This contest has inspired a beautiful poem from you. Excellent job! Take Care! Cindy

One word: Beautiful!

It was perfect.. lots of love

thank you for commenting. means so much to me

<33 hb

Awesome...great stuff

Expressing my deepest thoughts
That flow through my heart
My feelings began to surface
Which were suppressed from the start

great line, my favorite keep it up and i apologize for just getting to read ur stuff but thanks for reading mine i appreciate it so much and ive added you to my favorites....

melissa

So you're falling in love with the wrong man, too. It's nice to know there's someone else out there who knows how I feel. I still care deeply for this one guy, but he clearly has moved on. This other guy walked into my life and saved me, and I feel attached to him, but I know deep down inside, I'll never be able to get over the first guy. My first love. I'll let you know if I figure out how to handle this situation!

This is indeed a very beautifully written poem...could feel so much of emotions flowing right from every single word...loved it all the way indeed

all the best and take care