One true friend

by Hellie   Feb 21, 2007


The feel of you is amazing
its just the perfect rush
when i see you
every time i see you I'm glad
i told my friends about you
they all said i must be mad

but you see your my one true friend
i can be my true self with you
i don't have to pretend
you help me when I'm down
give me the sweet whispers i love

and when you give me the reward
of my sweet blood trickling down
i cant help but smile
at my one true friend__x

Please comment__x sorry its a bit depressing lol__x

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  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Good job, very emotional. I interpreted by the "and when you give me the reward
    of my sweet blood trickling down
    i cant help but smile
    at my one true friend" that this friend of yours is a knife. Maybe I'm wrong, I don't know ... Well written anyway, 5/5. Em x

  • 16 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Giid job on this poem i love it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by esmeralda

    Aw thats so cute i loved it 5/5

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