Sanctuary

by xPerfect Chaosx   Feb 22, 2007


When you hold me in your arms,
All my problems,
Even if it's just for a minute,
Seem to disappear,
And nothing else in the world matters,
Except you and me.
You make me think that your arms can protect me from the world,
And that you'll always be there to catch me,
No matter how hard I fall.
You make me feel safe,
Like no one can hurt me.
You mean the world to me
And I don't ever want to lose you
Your arms are my sanctuary.
And when you hold me,
The world seems to stop moving,
And I want the moment to last forever....
Don't let go of me...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent, ur description of santuary is perfect. superb 5/5 truely.

  • 16 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Thats really funny xDD

  • 17 years ago

    by Chained4ever

    Wow this was a beautiful poem. It was deep and it sounded alive if you know what i mean. I loved it and i cant wait to read more. I hope you have more poems like this.

    ~~~~~~Chained4ever~~~~~~~5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    "You mean the world to me
    And I don't ever want to lose you
    Your arms are my sanctuary.
    And when you hold me,
    The world seems to stop moving,
    And I want the moment to last forever....
    Don't let go of me..."

    that was my favorite part as well... great writing, and the flow was great... 5/5 from me, and thanks a lot for the many comments!!

    xoxo Sara

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Another great poem. the love is evident in this, and there is a secret deeper meaning in this. that i don't know. but i liked it anyway. i have to give you a 5/5. david