I really loved it and I think that anyone who has felt the sharp blade of a broken heart would understand it. Some of us just haven't learned how to express it or say that we are in pain. Even to our self's.
Please keep writing and know that you have at least one fan out there!

That was amazing good work i done my first poem tonight haha i donno if its that good but i like this one its awsome

Unique and creative. i loved it. you have a great talent, keep writing! and thx for the comment on mine! â—‹â—‹bethany

I thought this poem was so heartfelt and so strong, i really liked it, you've got talent kid! you keep it up! 5/5 tom x

I am speechless!!
"As she reaches the last page
The sketchings are few
The space filled by three words
I'M OVER YOU"
This is am amazing piece. Totally love it and the last stanza - i almost felt triumphant reading it - like Yes!! You are very talented i enjoyed this piece a lot.

kelly
xx

I liked it..nice one..ur a gr8 writer btw..